Caroline will provide comments
pertaining to thematic issues. For
fiction manuscripts, Caroline will
address plot, character develop-
ment, pacing, and overarching style.
For nonfiction writing, Caroline will
address the persuasiveness and
clarity of the argument, consistency,
voice, and structure. This option
includes comments throughout
the work, and a letter thoroughly
addressing big-picture concerns.
Optionally included is a half-hour
phone call to review the feedback,
any questions, and strategies for
implementing revision suggestions.
Caroline will provide comments pertaining to the reader's experience at the sentence level, including diction, syntax, and paragraph structure. In a narrative manuscript, Caroline will also assess the strength of dialogue and how language is contributing to character voice and plot development. In a persuasive or research-based work, Caroline will assess how word choice and sentence structure are serving the desire rhetorical points. This option will include a fully marked-up manuscript and an optional phone call to review feedback.
Caroline will provide comments and corrections on any issues with grammar, spelling, or typographical errors. This option includes a fully marked-up manuscript.